ladymarmalade

I absolutly LOVED this! I love the dynamic rhythm it represents. It shows that people really do show their true colors, usually ones we care not to see. Deception often ...

The last stanza is what really got me. I could just see that scene so vividly and "Crystal Clear". Aha corny pun, my bad. Loved your poem! keep it up! ...

Beautiful. Reminds me of my deceased Grandmother, and how much of an extraordinary person she really was. makes you appreciate your elders all the more. Well done. :D

Really interesting. Definetly caught and kept my attention. Of course it's fairly obvious what it is (not a bad thing at all), but it explains all the factors dreams really ...

Common question we ask ourselves everyday... why do we really love people? I loved the obvious personal emotion in this even just by using simple words and clever word play. ...

I'll admit, I didn't really understand the title until the last stanza. I sense alot of emotion, feeling, and personal vendetta behind this. I very much unsterstand what you're trying ...

Wow, this is AMAZING! This song has always been on the repeat on my Ipod! (Sad, yes I know I have Disney songs on my Ipod) It was artfully created ...

Definetly has plenty of potential. I would love to see a continuation of this. The only issue I had was I couldn't clearly see the plot line. You seem to ...

This was so amazing! I had alot of fun reading it and I'm glad you came up with the idea to do it! It just blends together so perfectly the ...

Very nice! I'm a sucker for these kind of stories, so this one drew me right it. I almost think you could continue this and make a sweet little story ...

Nice story! I would love to keep on reading this. The only issue I had was in the second paragraph a few less adjectives I think would have made it ...

I will admit, the Italian version intimidated me at first, but seeing that there was a English version relieved me. Haha, but to get to the actual review, I'll start ...

It was so nicely put together. All the time while reading it, the repeated "I know something you don't know" almost reminded me of elementary children playing jump rope, singing ...

This is incredible. It had me perpetually lost in the story. Your piece was so filled with emotion, I felt like it was swirling all around me. Keep up the ...

A classic look at every teenage girl's opinionated gaze on boys. We think too much, they think about nothing. We give details, they grunt. We think love, they think it's ...