ladydinosaur

The first few lines of this are great--I love how you go from longer, more descriptive sentences to a short, simple sentence ('not the silence'). It creates a nice rhythm. ...

I love the fairy-tale feel to this story. It's a very creative idea, and your execution is great. The idea of Pabo living in a giant's rib cage is one ...

The dialogue in this is perfect--realistic and easy to read. I like the description of Matt in the beginning, particularly all the questions he asks in the first few paragraphs. ...

*squeals because FEMINIST DRAGONS* I love the narration throughout this story--it really sounds like a fairy tale. The word choices and dialog are spot-on. The only complaints I have are ...

I like how you wrote in actual 'text speak', complete with a few errors--it feels very realistic. The description on the first paragraph is good, too--I liked the description of ...

I love the plot of this story so much. It's so creative, and it's also very well-written, which is a pretty rare combination. I liked how it ended on a ...

The title is great, and I love how you describe so much in so few words. The rhythm is perfect, particularly in the last few lines. (From 'upon my lips ...