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First - I think writers should never apologize for their work ahead of time. If you wrote it and you chose to publish it, take responsibility for it. Enough said. ...

You have an interesting narrative. Things are happening that are unexpected like the sudden shift from cop cars out front of the house to your character wasted in the house. ...

I think you have a potentially good story. You need to add more your plot, that is, describe their reasons for doing what they do and acting as they act. ...

A touching story. I think when you were in the mind of the child it was stronger than when you were in the mind of the mother. I'm curious about ...

I might be the worst person to review poetry or the best because most of it goes over my head. I'm so literal. Given that you did evoke an emotional ...

This is the third part of your book that I will review. It's kind of interesting reading it like this. It's like all the patches of a quilt piled and ...

This is the second section of the 'Book Man' that I will review. I have not read all of it but do enjoy it. I like the way you weave ...

You have an interesting set of powers and ideas. I like the ice bubble and I like the various types of non-humans. I have not read other parts of your ...

Good lord but this is a long post. I have to start writing part of the review before I get to the end. I like your voice. It is harsh, ...

This story creates a lovely little scene. You have added the right amount of description to paint the scene for me and give a sense of the emotion your characters ...

I should expect you know your imagination is excellent. You definitely had my interest with your unusual place and circumstances. I like your style and you have a fun voice. ...

I like your writing and I like that this isn't going to be a story about humans hanging on the edge as zombies take over, at least not a first. ...

You write ok. Your vocabulary is ok. Your plot is ok. Your punctuation is so-so. All of it needs work but it is a good start. You have the ability ...

I am reviewing your work for the sake of clearing the Green Room vs. an interest in Pokemon. I have played the games but that is enough for me. I ...

I like several things about your story but it isn't a contest winner at this point. I suggest you read BlueAfrica's review well and consider her points. She provided you ...