kynaswords

Let me start by saying I absolutely love the idea of this short story. I love the theme of friendship in this and how you portrayed the two characters. It ...

Well, I'm back to review chapter 2! There are a few typos, so before posting I suggest looking through and checking for those. Also, in this paragraph: He seems more ...

Before I begin my review, happy one month to this chapter! I've always loved rebellious narrators, so it immediately caught my interest when the narrator says she's breaking every rule ...

Oh, my God! I love this! I like the way it's written like a diary. I think my favourite part just has to be, "Sista? No. That makes me look ...

I loved the ending of the poem. "If I'm your better or your best" is a brilliant way to end it. I think you're missing some punctuation, like in the ...

I like the meaning I'm getting in this poem. The idea of building walls to hide what you're really feeling is something I can relate to pretty well. I think ...

This short story really gave me the chills. It's one of those that really hit me and made me go, "Oh, my God". So, good job on that. I definitely ...