kris

I think it is hard to make an ultra-short poem work well. This, i believe did work. So well done, on that part. It did have a definite pace and ...

I am obliged to agree with Eimear on this one. She has hit the nail on the head. You clearly have the knack for story-telling and description. However, this is ...

WOW! that was bleeding amazing! I am really, impressed. My favorite stanza was: Open the windows, air the smell of death off their sweaty skin, come on now, less of ...

I am not sure why, but there was such a deep atmosphere in this poem! while i read it, i could hear storm clouds in my head. Very surreal :P ...

I liked it. I am also, going to go against the flock to say: I think that your use of structure and stanza were very clever. The narration is from ...

Incredible. Very well thought out indeed. You have touched on a subject that is very sympathetic to those who will read it :P you sly fox. It reads, very smoothly. ...

A very poignant poem indeed. It left a lot of room for interpretation - i took the thought of the Irish immigrants in the 19th century immigrating to the Americas. ...

A very well thought out poem. Your clearly put a lot of time into your choice of words. The only problem is have with it, is that it does not ...

Firstly i must say. This is so emotive and touching. I was on the verge of tears toward the end, very very sad indeed. It was not clear that the ...

BIENVENUE!! Welcome! now! let us begin. Firstly - well done, it was nice to read and you did not have too many "run-on" sentences (something i must admit that i ...

A genuinely beautiful poem. You certainly have a way with words. I must second that which the post above mentioned. However - the end is practically taken from Romeo & ...

H'okay! It was a very good poem indeed, but i thought the rhythm was off at some points and the lack of punctuation was a bit of a problem. Why ...

Oh my giddy aunt. That was terrific! it was like an on-going poem...really beautiful imagery too...shit me! my heart is still racing from that opening. Makes me want to read ...

Firstly - I need to admit that i am a sucker for free verse and progressive/ experimental anything i say is going to be bias. OK! I LOVED IT! :D ...

WELCOME!!! i am new to this site as well...I cannot keep away..*worries* A very pleasant read :D thank you for a nice way to spend 10mins. (hugs) You might want ...