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Re: Chapter one Of Speechless
Hey, here to review! I haven't done this in a while, so bear with me.(: I'm not good at catching grammar mistakes, so I'm not going to focus on that. ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Movie you have seen...
Okay, I'm a HUGE fan of movies and films, so I decided to pipe in on this topic. I can't really say my ALL TIME FAVORITE movie because I don't ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Everlasting War: Pre-Recorded Times Chapter 1
Hello! Here to review!This is the first review I have done in a while, so I'm a little rusty.(: I say this to everyone: If I hurt feelings, I'm sorry. ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: The Other Side of the Fire *Removed
Hello! Here to review. There really isn't much to review, but oh well!(: Kathy walked out of the movie theaters This should be "theater" in a crying rage. As she ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: The Plague
Hello! I have short amount of time to review, so I will keep it short and sweet! Also, I have no intentions of hurting or damaging feelings. I'm sorry if ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Hello, I'm here to review!(: Okay, just informing you, it's very important to research, research, and research more about WWII. It's always important before writing a historical novel, you want ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Two Different Worlds *CHAPTER 3*
Okay, in this, add more thought, feeling, make it feel like the reader is actually your MC. Let them live in the world that your MC is in. Adding thoughts ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Tara chapter one *part two!*
Hey ladypurple! I am here to review!(: I have no intention of hurting feelings!(: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Green- Take out Pink- Highlite I will re-name this The Fury later. ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger games-Rue- Part one
Hello! I am here to review. Before I get to reviewing, I have no intention on hurting your feelings. It is just constructive criticism.(: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Green- Take ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: the elementals (title curtosy of rocksmith)
Hello! I am here to review! It's never my intention to hurt any feelings!(: I caught many punctuation errors like Razzker said earlier. “Hi, my name is Seraphina. I am ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: The Girl With The Cheetah Mark(Ch.1)
Hey Murray! I am here to review! Sorry it took me a while to review, I have been kinda busy. (: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Green- Take out Pink- Highliting ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: The Arrow Wielder (Prologue)
Hey! I am here to review!(: I don't mean to hurt your feelings. (: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Green- Take out Pink- Highliting The streaming sound as the speeding arrow ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Whispered Strength Chapter 2
Hey Adeera! I am here to review! I have no intention on hurting your feelings!(: Red- Corrections Blue-Comments Green-Take out Pink- Highlighting CHAPTER 2 W hen the horses where in ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: The Girl With The Cheetah Mark
Hey Murray! I am here to review today! It's never my intention on hurting your feelings. (: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Green- Take out Pink- Highliting Prologue I ran with ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Whispered Strength Prologue and Chapter 1
Hello Adeera! I am here to review today! I don't have any intention on hurting your feelings!(: Red- Corrections Blue- Comments Pink- Highliting Green- Take out Prologue ”HIS name will ...
Jul 14, 2010