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Yeah I only seem to have this problem with English since in my language long sentences are more common. But I will work on it! Again thanks a lot! :)

Hello there. You are so right! I knew something was off and I wasn't sure if short sentences would make it better or worse but now that you pointed out ...

Hello there I m Kostia and I m here to give you a review for this piece. Let's start then! I want to start by saying I liked it and ...

Hello there and thank you so much for the review! You really made some very helpful comments. To answer your questions since I understand this can be confusing. The story ...

I'd love to see it when it done! :)

Hello there wafflewolf7! I m Kostia and I am here to give you a brief but hopefuly helpful review for your poem. First of all I enjoyed reading it and ...

Thank you so much for this lovely review! I will consider your suggestions when I edit this. The ending does feel a bit rushed since this isn't the end of ...

It's okay really no worries :D

Hello Ardently! I decided to edit this and start my story from there. So in later editions there will be much more "showing" I guess I just wanted to go ...

That was a really good review, I found your suggestions very helpful. Thank you so much for your time! :D

And thank you for your review :)

Hello there and thank you so much for the review and the like. This is an alternative beginning to my story that I just started working on I m not ...

Your grammatical notes are very helpful since I am not a native speaker I recently started writing in English. Thank you so much for the review!

Well Liz that was kind of harsh since this isn't finished, it is the first draft and not even slightly edited. But that's okay I respect your opinion even though ...

Hello there for some reason I just saw this review, I must have missed it somehow. Conolyn is able to say it was unintentional since the movement was too slight ...