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Well, I thought the Japanese honorifics would help because the main protagonist is Japanese. Also, I can see how the title seems redundant and I should keep in English and ...

Thanks for the help in editing. Also, the reason why I made Prince Kevin act like that was because he was a reference to Major Alex Louis Armstrong from Fullmetal ...

This poem was extremely kawaii! it may have been short, but it was fun to read. This is like a poem about falling in love in high school. Again, very ...

The folder has already been made. Hope you enjoy the rest.

The folder has already been made. Hope you enjoy the rest.

you're welcome

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention the reason why Heinrich attacked Akira and tried to strip Red naked. Normally, Werewolves are more of a warrior race. Though his attentions for ...

Do you have any suggestions on how to make them more "in depth"?

This novel is in first person and it would look like it's telling. Also, the novel-based manga are called "light novels" and are the source for most manga in Japan. ...

Thanks

you're welcome. In the third chapter, I'm featuring snow white in the middle of it. any suggestions?

Thank you for the review and the observation of mistakes. The reason why Kita Akira introduces himself by his last name first is because that's how people of east asia ...

Chapter 2 is already posted.

When I saw the title, I thought it would be a happy Christmas poem. Then, when I read the poem, it filled me with dread and somber. It tells of ...

Thanks for the reviews and I can see how much emotion I left out in the prologue. I already fixed that part and added some description on how he's feeling. ...