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Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2
Also, your assumption that I have chased away my audience is completely inaccurate as there are people reading this story and appreciating the dark and humanistic elements of the story. ...
Sep 15, 2018 -
Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2
You do realize that the age of sixteen is the legal age of marriage, not only in the United States, but in certain regions of the world. second, this is ...
Sep 15, 2018 -
Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2
okay, now I got it. that was kind of the whole point. kind of deconstructs the "happily ever after" feeling like you get when George R. R. Martin kills off ...
Sep 14, 2018 -
Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2
how did I undo chapter 1?
Sep 14, 2018 -
Re: the Broken Sword Prologue + Ch. 1
yes.
Sep 13, 2018 -
Re: the Broken Sword Prologue + Ch. 1
Hey, Zoom. took your comments and have edited the first chapter. here's to answer your questions. the problem with Microsoft word is that it never informs you perfectly of the ...
Sep 13, 2018 -
Re: Magician's Wars Chapter 6
Yeah, i based the student body on my high school experience where the bible club ran the school and the student body government was basically an extension of it. they ...
Sep 10, 2018 -
Re: Magician's Wars Chapter 6
Also, the principal does know that Claire can be out of control but since her family is donating large amounts of money, he doesn't want to jeopardize the school's funding ...
Sep 8, 2018 -
Re: Magician's Wars Chapter 6
Thanks. there's a reason why Gabe is a little out of character and while it may seem stereotypical, sometimes confident people will lose it when they meet someone or something ...
Sep 8, 2018 -
Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 2
You are welcome. Also, it's not like they care about it but if a noble is doing it and promotes it, then others would follow and the popularity would make ...
Sep 6, 2018 -
Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 2
The reason Sir Richard takes her in is out of tolkinism since Taking in a squire who is a peasant and a woman would make him and his family look ...
Sep 6, 2018 -
Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 2
Thanks. also, there's a good reason why I placed the flashback and gave it such length mostly to give a better insight in Michael's life and what occurred before his ...
Sep 6, 2018 -
Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 2
Also, I made a couple of changes to both the first and second chapter. so, you might want to read the first chapter again before reading the second.
Aug 25, 2018 -
Re: Magician's Wars Chapter 6
A/N: Hey, guys. this is Kman134. Here, with a new chapter of Magician's Wars. This might not be action back and is mostly suppose to give a better insight on ...
Aug 8, 2018 -
Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 2
A/N: Hey, guys. this is kman134 with a new chapter of Promethean Chronicles. The second chapter is a flashback chapter to explain more of Michael's life and how he became ...
Aug 3, 2018
