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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 3

    Yeah, that's going to be hard. :(

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 3

    Thanks for the review, Pan. To answer your questions. Yes. It's a flashback dream, which was stated in Chapter 2. It is suppose to symbolize Michael's depression and shows who ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 3

    For the record, this chapter was a rush job and there was bound to be grammatical errors. Microsoft word doesn't really point that out.

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 3

    Thanks for the review. to answer your question of the sex. they're in a fantasy world where magic and alchemy dominates science. pregnancy tends to be sporadic due to a ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: the Broken Sword Prologue + Ch. 1

    Alright. I%u2019ll change it.

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: the Broken Sword Prologue + Ch. 1

    Also, I come from North Carolina and 16 is the age of consent for women.

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2

    That's because, in Game of Thrones, there were girls who were pregnant at 16 to 17 since that was common in the Middle Ages. Okay. this is seriously going no ...

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2

    here you are accusing me of pedophilia when you don't even know me. if you did, you would know that I detest pedophiles, seeing them as one of the stains ...

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2

    You know that's not what I meant about feminism and you're purposely taking everything out of context just to spite me. listen. I would actually walk from this and just ...

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2

    yes and so were some of the female characters in Song of Ice and Fire and A Storm of Swords. Look how that turned out, especially in the Red Wedding.

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: the Broken Sword Prologue + Ch. 1

    thank you. you gave a much better insight than certain people. the last person who talked about the sex just kept bashing me, telling me I'm fetishizing child pornography.

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2

    Also, I've actually read Lolita and the girl in the story was 14 not 16.

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2

    It isn't the review that makes you shortsighted and idiotic but how you obsessed with something as trivial as sex and what makes you unrealistic is that you're using a ...

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2

    p.s. if you post a response, then you are just proving my point on what a troll you really are.

    Sep 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Broken Sword Ch. 2

    News flash. I'm also an existentialist and a consequentialist that believes morality is relative and that actions have outcomes. Silas isn't rewarded for sex if you actually read the story ...

    Sep 15, 2018


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