klennon14

Thank you! I have certainly taken all of your comments into consideration. Maybe I'm trying too hard with the fast-paced, fast forward feel. I wanted it to feel like Ronnie ...

Late reply, but thank you so much!

I don't want to start a conflict or anything like that, but is this just a concept/idea or is this your actual view on the world? You don't have to ...

Thank you ChocolateCello! I do have issues with my rhyming patterns. I'll get lost in writing the poem, honing in on what I am feeling, then I'll drop the rhyming ...

Thank you for your review! I actually think fortri's review was helpful, and I like nitty gritty reviews where writers tell me their authentic opinion. I know, I am a ...

I appreciate your input and I have absorbed your advice. I do feel that poetry "about love and emotions and souls and hearts and blood," is important. It is raw ...

I had separated this into stanzas, and I'm not sure why it didn't upload that way. I will fix this eventually.

No rush, especially since these are VERY rough versions.

Thanks so much for the review! I plan on taking down both huge chunks of chapters and separating them into much smaller sections as many of you have suggested. I ...

Thank you so much! I'm happy to get any feedback, and there is certainly a lot of polishing up that I need to get done. Your comments mean everything in ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you! :)

You are NOT a "meanie head," because your review was very thoughtful and helpful! I love reviewers who tell me they see rough patches and how to smooth them out! ...

Ohhhh, so it's from her friends point of view. I was reviewing your prologue thinking it was Sage for some reason. Anyway, again, well-written and heart-wrenching. Full of raw emotion ...

Thanks again for your advice! It helps me improve as a writer in more ways than you know. There are definitely some confusing parts to my story still, and I ...