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Re: Animalsim
Have you ever watched the show Look Around You? Because the same narrator with the same English accent was reading this in my head. Um. So! This was interesting. Well, ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: That Day
Oh! I'm sorry for this craptastic review, but I was told that I needed to get off the internet soon; and I decided it would be impossible for me to ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Up In Flames; Rough Draft
day-dream --- one word It feels good to be honest-with you and... --- I don't think that hyphen is needed. I tell them all that they are hopeless Romantics. --- ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Abducted
Hello, silver ^^ I really liked this poem, especially how it started out with "Lithe form." Maybe it's because I've always liked the word lithe for some reason. There was ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: cart race
First off... Hi and welcome to YWS! :D --- --- --- --- Grammar Claire and Maggie clenched their teeth, burying their faces deep into their coats; it was the second ...
Jun 4, 2009 -
Re: Wake Up, You're Dead
S'up, Mike, Um, I don't know what else to put other than this was pure awesomeness! ^^ Sorry, no real critique here to give you. This was my favorite part, ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Falling Slowly [1]
Hello, Colleen! I'm sorry if this review won't be much help to you in advance, by the way. :) A few days ago I was planning on doing something that ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Earth to Skye
Yays! First here! :D Okay, first off I really like the idea of this story and how she has an imaginary friend, the therapist, and the fact that her sister's ...
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: Faceless
Hello, elijah! ^^ Okay, maybe it was just me, but some things about this piece really made me sigh and take back my original thoughts on it. The first sentence, ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: ...
Uh, Pork? Wow. That was... odd. But I really liked it! I'm not sure I really have anything else to say actually. It was the best. Enough said. -kittykat Peace ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Recollecting Melody
Hello, Anna! I'd like to start out with saying that this (if you continue it) will defininately be one of the stories I'll be looking out for to review. I ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: The Earthworm Farmer #2
Hello, Kylan! I don't think I've ready any of your poetry before, but I've seen a few stories. I really like this poem, all the description, the metaphors. The first ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 2 - Online Intruder
Hi again, Jordan! :D To tell you the truth I went to this chapter before the first and I so confused. So, once I read the first chapter, I actually ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Online Intruder
Hello, Jordan! Since springrain already got the the grammer, I suppose I'll go right to review of the story? I'm really glad I've finally got to read another horror story ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: A Superman, Edward Cullen & the Hulk spoof thing.
*rolls around on the floor laughing hysterically* I love these things! Totally wasn't a wast of time. 8) This was probably my favorite part: Edward: I’m so sparkly! WHEEEEE!!! I ...
Oct 22, 2008
