kitty_savior

This was nice ^_^ Reminds me a bit of the magic realism I've read for my Spanish classes - the kind of stories where the surreal blends with the real, ...

Hmmmm First off, I really liked the discourse on calculus and physics in the last stanza. It said 'Aha!' in my head. It clicked. As for the rest of the ...

The rhyming inconsistency weakens your poem. I have to agree with Snoink that the "broad light" verse doesn't add much - maybe you can include the concept of brilliance with ...

This is interesting, even if it may need some work. It's like you're still in the process of reeling in a thought. I think it's good that a poem has ...