kitkatimaginethat

I think u need to find another website to get some critique! Although they could just critique part of it..

Thanks. I will go back and add some more details.

How's it a great poem if it doesn't make sense? Or are you meaning just that one line? As I posted, I quickly wrote this . I'm a super fast ...

I always had problems making up haikus but you did good. Hope to see more soon!