kirstenPsings

Thanks esnym! I see what you mean by the last two sentences. I think your right in the sense it could be stated differently. I will work on it for ...

Thanks Prolixity! Your right that the tones of the two paragraphs are different. I'm not really sure where I'm going with it but you gave me some great ideas!

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Thank you! :)

Great poem! I often find myself asking the same questions, what is love? and Who is to determine it? thanks for sharing!

Baby, don't hurt me. Don't hurt me. No more. ?

Awesome! Loved the picture it paints of love, it keeps you with an open mind in the end so you can answer it for yourself (I like that part best ...

Thanks Tgirly! I, myself, did feel that the rhythm was a little off in the ending, but I've found there is rhythmic change in many poems that may seem a ...