kingoctavian

Beautiful work I am a huge poetry buff but I honestly can not write it well to save my life, so good for you being as talented as you are. ...

I am confused by this. There isn't really any insight into what is supposed to be happening in my opinion. I tried to find the meaning in what I was ...

Beautiful, I adored reading that. The first stanza was so strong! full of deep meaning and worth definitely an attention grabber. I would think about avoiding slang such as "you ...