kimmy

Anyway, on to the plot! It was nice, though I wished you could have explained more about her last few months. Aside from, that, I liked it. honestly, i would ...

i think...

the extra away and such gave it a bit of an echo=)

i like has alot of metaphors and keeps the reader interested! great job!

Its pretty good! i really like that she comes to life in th ending.... like she finds herself! but still, i seen a few mistakes but those were only spelling ...