killerpanda809

I like that there was almost no grammatical errors. I like that you put a lot of action into this story. I liked that you put a lot of detail ...

thank you very much that is as true as corgis are awsome.

I can tell this was about bootyism. there was some places in the story did not make sense. You could have done much better.

This was so amazing i fell of my chair at the last sentence. Again it was amazing.