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i liked it.i think it a good opening for somthing biger.

i realy liked this story!i was alittle confused in the begining. i could not get a good picture of what you wwere talking about.i did like how it flowed and ...

i am not very good at this reveiw thing but i LOVED this was very smoth and flowed very well.i have read many poems on this site, and i thought ...

i like the message you were trying to convey,but it was alittle....i agree with boolovesyou.

i agree with all that emmzziee said.:)

i agree with green finnch.i dont know what but it was lacking....heres a good way to put it, its like a perfictly frosted cake except the cake was made out ...

i liked it but wasn't there saposed to be commas or periods to to a line and idea?