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Hey, it's a good one and I hope that you will continue writing. I know you can write and you just have to keep on trying okay? And please tell ...

Hey Book, it's very touching and most of the correction had been review by others so I don't have much to say here. But keep on writing because i want ...

This poem is kind of short but you could expand it with ideas and it will be a great longer poem. Trust me, it will be a great poem. Keep ...

Alright, I see that grammar has pretty much been covered, however, I do think you need some puncuation at the end of lines. But keep on writing because practice makes ...

Thanks for the reviews and I was doing this in my class so I can't really think straight.

It's good but sorry to say this. It's kind of a little too short.

This poem is okay but I don't like the way things keep repeating through the poem, I just didn't get the impact that I think it should have had. It's ...