khunter

To be honest, this isn't good at all. I'm pretty sure you can do better. The beginning is weaker than Usher's voice when he tries to sing and dance at ...

If you think that I am going to be passive about this, however You, my dear former friend, are sadly mistaken This sounds a bit awkward. I don't know the ...

Fresh Air I suffocate from voices. Splashing the restful, struggling to glimpse the surface, I breathe fresh air. I love this part! BUt what is this entire poem about?

WOW! this is amazing! you are amazing as well. But like most of these comments, I have some issues with some stuff on here... soooooo...... Let the Constructive Critisism begin ...

I like it. The romance is gorgeous. The night sounds like it was a perfect night. But there are some things i feel could have been better. When I was ...