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Re: Running Away (better titles?)
Hello there. Popping in to give a much-deserved review even if it somehow missed its train all those years ago. First off, I'm curious if there was a word count ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: Some kind of Wonderful. 13+
Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review after longer than a decade's wait. First off, I'm curious if you ever did something else with this, as I'm ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: I Never Knew the History She Remembered
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that must have missed its stop all those years ago. First off, I'm curious by the fact that this reads as ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: Volcano
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that is arriving rather late. First off, this is an interesting idea to base a story around. Natural disasters can be ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: The mental paitent (revised)
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that must have missed the train all those years ago. First off, I think that the formatting, or maybe lack of ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: The Friend
Hello there. Popping in to give a much-deserved review, even if it's taken a long time. First off, I think that what is lacking here is a more laid-out plot. ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: War (I wrote this when I was younger and stupid)
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that took a very long time in arriving. First off, I think that this felt very robotic and retracted from the ...
Sep 18, 2018 -
Re: four things that never happened to Grace Hampton
Hello there. Popping in to give a much-deserved and waited on review. Let's see. I think I'll go over these pieces one by one, as I don't want to combine ...
Sep 18, 2018 -
Re: Forget the Velveteen Rabbit, My Pink One Rocks!
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's very long in coming, but at least it's here now. First off, I think this was a cute idea, but ...
Sep 18, 2018 -
Re: DARK WINGS (13+ for themes and language)
Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review even with the very wide time gap. First off, the first-person narration is not the greatest here. Sometimes novels can ...
Sep 17, 2018 -
Re: Lost
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that is very long in coming, but at least it's here now. First off, I'm not in love with how you ...
Sep 16, 2018 -
Re: Rifts That Would Heal
Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review, despite it arriving so late. First off, I find myself feeling sympathetic to the MC, which can be a little ...
Sep 16, 2018 -
Re: There Is Nothing Left To Lose
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's very long in coming. First off, this has an extensive vocabulary, which well neat to read, makes me a little ...
Sep 16, 2018 -
Re: Complicated Love
Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review even if it's been a long time since this was posted. First off, I think that this is interesting enough, ...
Sep 16, 2018 -
Re: A life unwritten-finished!!
Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's long in coming, but at least it's here now. First off, I think that this requires some formatting and cutting ...
Sep 16, 2018
