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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Running Away (better titles?)

    Hello there. Popping in to give a much-deserved review even if it somehow missed its train all those years ago. First off, I'm curious if there was a word count ...

    Sep 19, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Some kind of Wonderful. 13+

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review after longer than a decade's wait. First off, I'm curious if you ever did something else with this, as I'm ...

    Sep 19, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I Never Knew the History She Remembered

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that must have missed its stop all those years ago. First off, I'm curious by the fact that this reads as ...

    Sep 19, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Volcano

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that is arriving rather late. First off, this is an interesting idea to base a story around. Natural disasters can be ...

    Sep 19, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The mental paitent (revised)

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that must have missed the train all those years ago. First off, I think that the formatting, or maybe lack of ...

    Sep 19, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Friend

    Hello there. Popping in to give a much-deserved review, even if it's taken a long time. First off, I think that what is lacking here is a more laid-out plot. ...

    Sep 19, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: War (I wrote this when I was younger and stupid)

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that took a very long time in arriving. First off, I think that this felt very robotic and retracted from the ...

    Sep 18, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: four things that never happened to Grace Hampton

    Hello there. Popping in to give a much-deserved and waited on review. Let's see. I think I'll go over these pieces one by one, as I don't want to combine ...

    Sep 18, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Forget the Velveteen Rabbit, My Pink One Rocks!

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's very long in coming, but at least it's here now. First off, I think this was a cute idea, but ...

    Sep 18, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: DARK WINGS (13+ for themes and language)

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review even with the very wide time gap. First off, the first-person narration is not the greatest here. Sometimes novels can ...

    Sep 17, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lost

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that is very long in coming, but at least it's here now. First off, I'm not in love with how you ...

    Sep 16, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rifts That Would Heal

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review, despite it arriving so late. First off, I find myself feeling sympathetic to the MC, which can be a little ...

    Sep 16, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: There Is Nothing Left To Lose

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's very long in coming. First off, this has an extensive vocabulary, which well neat to read, makes me a little ...

    Sep 16, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Complicated Love

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a much-deserved review even if it's been a long time since this was posted. First off, I think that this is interesting enough, ...

    Sep 16, 2018
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: A life unwritten-finished!!

    Hello there. Popping in to give you a review that's long in coming, but at least it's here now. First off, I think that this requires some formatting and cutting ...

    Sep 16, 2018


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