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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Delta - 19.2

    Back again

    Feb 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Delta - 19.1

    Hello again. Let's see. It's been a while since I read a present time chapter, but this helps place me in the story either way. I think it'll be interesting ...

    Feb 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Delta - 18.2

    Hey there again - gonna get back into all of these chapters now. First off, I'm very happy/excited to learn more about Harry here. It's easy to fall into her ...

    Feb 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hero's Brother (13.1)

    Hello there! Decided to pop by and boot this out of the Green Room, even though I haven't read much of this before. Eech, sorry. First, I really like that ...

    Feb 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Politics Re: It Was Tolerance, They Told Us. We are Peacekeepers, They Said.

    Hi. Let's talk about this story for a second. First off, I just want to say that it can be hard to review something without taking into account the message ...

    Feb 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Delta - 18.1

    Hello there. I've been meaning to get to this, but I guess it wasn't meant to be until now. A few things to talk about here. Since this is a ...

    Feb 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: #24 - controversially

    Hello Lizz. I really like this poem, so I want to give you some sort of nice feedback. I really enjoy short poems that have some form of a message, ...

    Feb 3, 2019
  • Script » Fanfiction, Humor Re: In Which My 3 Fave Avengers Go Shopping: A Script

    Hello there. I figured I'd give you a second review on this and boot it out of the Green Room. Judging by a comment below, I understand this was meant ...

    Feb 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Delta - 17.3

    Hello there. Going to try to get back into reviewing this month. I think that it's interesting to see some aspects of the setting here - that on a normal ...

    Feb 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Science Fiction Re: Delta - 17.1

    Hello again - I've mostly caught up with this story to at least here, so let's get this out of the Green Room. One thing to start - I honestly ...

    Jan 27, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Marble Lungs / Draft 03 / Ch. 1.1

    I reviewed the past version some time ago, and I wanted to skip by and check this one out as well. For a first chapter, I might as well go ...

    Jan 27, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: State to State - 1.1

    Alright, let's see. This serves a nice opener for this story - the reader can learn about Sherlock's current situation and what could possibly be going on. With him reminding ...

    Jan 25, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: What happens now?

    Hello there. This may be a shorter review as this is pretty short in size itself, but I suppose I'll see where this goes. First, I wish this was longer, ...

    Jan 20, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: So here you are again...

    Hello there. Going to finish the third story in this mini collection. I do find it interesting that your style of shorter, choppier sentence work has carried throughout all of ...

    Jan 19, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Untitled Revaltions

    Hello there! I said I wanted to continue with your works, thus I have returned. I think that short stories, or almost here, flash fiction judging by how short this ...

    Jan 18, 2019


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