kevin25a

Your welcome, I liked this story a lot.

Like I said if you gave a spoiler in the one or two I haven't read that's just ruining your story. Has nothing to do with the fact I said ...

Now I see :P yeah my data cycle resets on the 12th, today I will watch the first episode before I try to sleep after work later.

Oh I didn't get the notification for that I guess.

I read 4 of them I believe I know I missed one or two but this was lacking serious amounts of details. Unless you claim to purposely put in spoilers ...

Didn't mean to offend you if I did. Just was a little confused by it was all.

I know you described where he is going generally but you didn't really explain why he needs to, or if you did it wasn't very clear and confusing. I read ...

Loved this looking forward to chapter three.

It must be an ohio thing, kids here usually get their first kiss in first grade or fifth here. People who get to middle school here and haven't are usually ...

It must be an ohio thing, kids here usually get their first kiss in first grade or fifth here. People who get to middle school here and haven't are usually ...

It must be an ohio thing, kids here usually get their first kiss in first grade or fifth here. People who get to middle school here and haven't are usually ...

I understand the explanation of them does seem kind of pointless but if they were the only magic users and Kevin only dates one of them his whole life how ...

Was going to type it when I got home. I'm waiting on the train back home at the moment and to hungry and tired, had to walk back to the ...

Your welcome. Honest opinions help writers in many ways.

This is a good story. It's sad how many guys are abusive assholes. That guy sounds like a common jock. Only about him, violent and abusive when he doesn't get ...