kevin25a

That was a really awesome story I look forward to the next chapter, I think you did damn awesome for imagery something I'm still improving in my own work. As ...

Wanted to also point out your mistake in saying hoe on line 27 you also misspelled on line 16 you said feed, should say fed well feed families makes no ...

This is something that a lot of older people really don't understand, and pretty much anyone older than 25 never experiences. As someone who was in your shoes I understand ...

I like how you started comparing it on a serious level, then explained it in a reality. Not enough people actually understand depression and ignorantly assume simply drugging someone is ...

Ok so she just got lucky to find the book? That's the only part I don't understand. You wrote the book was calling to her. But she found it by ...

This was a really good story. I will be following to see where you take it. This has a lot of potential, I look forward to your next chapter. Just ...