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Intensity. It's a bit disturbing in some parts, but then again what good book isn't? :D

I LOVE To Kill a Mockingbird. Best book of all time. Well, maybe not of all time, but it's still one of my favorites.

Thanks everyone! Alainna-- yes, this is it. I don't intend to write any more than this.

Schools are stupid. No offense or anything. But they really are. However, one thing that is NOT stupid is this story!!! It was very good, and very powerful. There really ...

Thanks, everyone! I wrote this a LONG time ago, and just decided to post it for the heck of it. It's just one chapter of a longer book that was ...

Thanks so much guys! I don't know yet if I'll write more...I kind of wanted it to be vague, so that the reader could kind of imagine it all. But ...

Wow, that was deep. But very good! I can't think of any matter how hard I I'll just leave it at that. Very good!

Yay the third part! I have nothing to say about this except I can't wait for the next part.

It was fun to read...I don't think you could really do anything with it but it was cute as far as just something to read when you are bored... :D

Aww! That was sweet! I liked it a lot. Especially the repetition of it. I liked the second stanza especially. Happy writing! ~Keira

Ooh! Yay! Yay! More Valentine's Day Sucks! I jumped for joy when I saw this topic posted... Don't really have any critique for it, it's good. Can't wait to read ...

This is good. I actually liked it a lot. I thought some parts were a bit cliche, with her dad beating her and such, and the boy ending up being ...

Wow! There really isn't any advice I can give you. I really loved this poem. It was very simple but yet effective. Nice job! :D

Thanks N! No, she is not ready to go inside, not at all, but she merely says, "Yes, darling, I'm ready." I love how you use darling , it reminds ...

Please, space your paragraphs out!! I started to read it but it just got to be too much...space it out, then I'll read the rest...