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I went through and changed a bit. Adding a few indicators and details here and there

Thank you for the recommendations. in the case of length, I am doing more of a light novel style, so the chapters are quite long and have a lot of ...

Thanks for the review

nice

I'm making it directly a light novel, so the chapters are each at least 5000 words.

Thanks for the misplaced comma, and the funny thing is, this is only part 1 of chapter 1, there's a second part.

yeah, I understand. have a good day.

Okay, I looked through and added descriptions for each of the council members if you want to read them. I also added a bit more indicators of who's talking

Don't actually know why they are blue, could be I italicized them or bolded them and it didn't translate well. Thanks for the review

Atronachs are a fancy name for elementals and a spring and is a tree spirit. The names are elder scrolls based And thanks for the critique, but yes it is ...

thanks for the review and the pointing out of the ever elusive question marks

And I do plan on trying to get it animated during the rewrite, so a video game would be awesome.

Thanks for the review, this is definitely the first of the absolute tense chapters. also, thanks for the correction. I have no clue why they just don't have both as ...

OH, You're pfp is Leiytning. I thought it was Genya from demonslayer

yes. a better example of what I was aiming for was Fran from Reincarnated as a Sword