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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Most Fabulous Sunglasses Model in the World

    Okay, I am meaning absolutely no offence whatsoever when I tell you that this is not something I would like to read unless I had to. I mean don't get ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Title's Don't Matter

    Haha, in some add way I deeply enjoyed your elusive writing, the concept of whatever you meant to get through to your reader evaded me but somehow I think that ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I Kissed a Girl

    Beautiful piece, though I'm not sure if you're aware that your last words are lyrics to a hit, mainstream song. That's a little too cleche for me :] No offence. ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: x

    Quite interesting. Though not long enough for my liking but none the less I liked it. Perhaps you left a little bit too much for the reader to make their ...

    Jul 22, 2008


i enjoy repeating things twice in poetry. but only ever twice. nothing tragic ever happens thrice if i have control of it
— theromanticchemist