katiekatt

Oooooooohhhh.... :) Ok then. Well I wasn't grossed out. But then again, I'm the kind of girl who would have a pet scorpion. Which is actually a popular pet!

:) Your welcome! And the writing was nice, and now that you told me it's not supposed to make sense, I think it's a great poem! :)

:) But I need more points to publish. I only have 139 points. Once I get enough, I will be publishing Part 1.

I forgot to say, but how is this describing wind? " The rat fell with a feathery splat"??? I was simply wondering. I will stop commenting now :( I could ...

This is very interesting, I do however think some stanzas and verses don't really make sense, but overall, nicely written! :) I am confused as why a rat would fall ...

No problem! :) I will republish part 1. And I will publish part 2. btw, be prepared for a twist in page 2!

Thank you so much Cheetah! :) Yes, The Fountain Cafe has an outdoor area where she is sitting. About the squirrel, I was trying to imply that Misty was very, ...

Hi emjayc! Thanks so much! I am really sorry about the confusion. I am in 6th grade, but I love writing! :) About the squirrel, I'm trying to imply that ...