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Thanks! Sorry for the late response. BTW, I simply made this book series for myself, not knowing people would read it :) Also, this isn't an introduction :) It is ...

Thank you very much, but I am ending this book series because I wasn't expecting people to read it, so I thought it could just be viewed by me. And ...

Thank you everyone who commented :) I hope I made it better! I am thinking of canceling this book series because I don't like it. :(

lol. She actually wasn't annoyed. Also I changed the "Alright, calm down" to "Alright, if you insist". he said with a frown."

I left lot's of descriptive things to YOUR imagination, so Waterfall can look like anything you want! also, this is part 2. That is why It begins with her walking ...

Aww.... So sad! :( And I don't want to make you or anything, but can someone please donate approx. 100 points? I don't have enough points to publish Waterfall Page ...

Awww... so sad! I thought you meant tarantula pet spiders. Since they are actually sold as pets! :)

I fixed most of the mistakes you guys pointed out :)

I fixed lots of the parts! :)

I just fixed the coffee giving part. But the waiter doesn't slam the coffee on the table since Misty takes it from his HANDS. But that would have been a ...

LOL :D

Did she see the spiders?

The reason she's at the cafe in not important. :)

Sorry! I kind of forgot that coffee doesn't magically appear! :P Anyways, as for the "I told him" part, Misty's voice was silent and emotionless. So I don't know what ...

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