kater_314

I thought it was good too. I wish there was more to it. :)

oh, why did you stop like that? uh... I'm not too good with the editing and stuff let me see....umm... maybe add a little more discriptions? Like about the scenery ...

Ooh, interesting...considering that the other people covered all i was going to say, i'll continue to part three. After all there's no use repeating, WHAT ARE THEY?

Yeah, I think it's great so far. Um...I guess I'll read the rest now.

I was frightened. The soothing voice was gone. He claimed he’d return, but that was highly unlikely. I couldn’t breathe and if I didn’t get out of here quick, I’d ...

Um. Thanks? There is a point to the prologue. It's giving the background. There will be two stories being told here. first, Xavior's. he's the leader of this "pack" of ...

ok, so the whole kything bit is in italics on where i originally wrote it. It just isn't here. Thanks for your help guys.

oh yeah...I forgot, um it was good considering I haven't even read chapter one! LOL.