kaiden

I'm afraid I don't understand the poem well. Half him and half her? By that you mean your mom and dad right? And it's too short to be sweet sorry. ...

ok... not bad for a writers block! I'm still trapped in one lol i can't even write much. But there's a lot of things that could have been better with ...

oooh nice! i like where this is going. just know that you have someone waiting to read the next part! I just wanted to clear a few things up. Because ...

nice! sounds intenst. i almost felt like i knew the feeling but i really don't. Great rhyming. I felt like the last part was a little weird, maybe you shouldn't ...

wow that was very... elaborate. i really like how you incorporate all the different cultures into one story. Each character's story is very interesting and can be another story all ...

hey first i just wanna say thanks for reviewing my poem. i was actually browsing through your portfolio and i see you've done a lot a of poetry and i ...

Hey nice story, Luke's got quite a temper eh? I just wanted to point out that Alex called Jason "Jacob" in the beginning where he mentions that he's with Amy. ...

but i felt it would be nice if you had at least one review right? lol Ok so i may not have read twilight but i understand the story for ...