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Re: The fragile paper and a broken promise
This is a really really cute little poem. It sounds really nice and has a child-like view on the world. I liked your choice of words like fragile. I like ...
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Re: The Girl
Hello! This was a nice story, but it doesn't seem quite complete. It's really short and you know, not complete. We know part of her back-story, but it doesn't seem ...
Jan 5, 2014 -
Re: Love Stories
Hello! I liked this poem because I can most definitely relate to this. It had good imagery and word choice. It flowed nicely and is really cute. One question though- ...
Jan 5, 2014 -
Re: Insanity
Hello MysteryMe. I really liked this poem. It's so short, yet unique and has interesting word choices. I like how it just nonchalantly mentions that you dropped your sanity somewhere ...
Jan 5, 2014 -
Re: Just a Cliché
Wow! This is really good! The imagery you used is really good. Your sentences were very descriptive. I couldn't find any grammatical errors. We can relate well to the character. ...
Jan 5, 2014