justApotato

I know what your going threw because I am going threw it as well. I fee like no one is there to help me or back me up because even ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. Like @FireSpyGirl I also found you were missing periods and commas but she already showed them to you so I'm just kind of telling you what ...

Hello there! I am here to review your work In any corrections I see I may need to give (to help) or things I enjoy so I hope you find ...

I think you did a lovely job with the meaning. Each bit of poetry no matter how long or short means something to that person. I really enjoyed reading this ...