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Re: Winter train
I liked it! You described the setting really will. I liked when the girl said "Mister, how many stars are there". I feel like that is really a big part ...
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Re: ;-;
That was really good. It was descriptive, and that is what people should read if they want to be able to relate to people with depression. Everyone can relate to ...
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Re: Tree Girl
Thank you for the suggestion! I will work on that.
Dec 3, 2020 -
Re: The Move That Changed Everything.
It was very well written, one note: you were switching between 1st person and 3rd person. Other than that it was really good!
Dec 3, 2020 -
Re: No Internet
That is a beautiful poem. Good job!
Dec 3, 2020 -
Re: The Purple House pt. 2
Wow! that was really detailed. It was very well written.
Dec 3, 2020 -
Re: Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
That was very well written!
Dec 3, 2020