jumpingsheep

Thank you for the reviews Megrim! I really appreciate it! I like your suggestion at the end for having each teen be questioned alone... I'll probably have that scenario when ...

Not a problem joef :D

Yes it did :P

Sorry about the double post!

I think that this is a very intriguing start to a novel! I like how you started with some action, and then flashes back to talk about how you got ...

Thanks so much for the review BellaRoma! I'll check out the bolded part-- I can't think of any bold text in a novel either. And the chapter titles, with the ...

Thank you for the reviews shaon! Glad you are enjoying this story!

I found the answer to my first question! Thanks!

Yay you decoded it! Thanks for the review! The historical allusions were both accidental and on purpose :)

Thank you for the review MacOitir; I really appreciate it! I've actually was just thinking yesterday about the tense I picked. I may have to alter the tense as the ...

Thanks for the review! The main character is a female, although you're right in that I never really explicitly stated that, something I didn't notice I didn't do... I'll clear ...

Thanks Merkava! I'll fix that bit about the bugs, "deal with" does sound much better :) And the tone will get more serious as the story progresses and things escalate ...

Oh man, this chapter was intense! I liked how fast paced this was, and how you illustrated the relationship between Sonya and Cody. I loved the dialogue between them; it ...

I like all of the vivid language in this chapter! The characterization of Wyatt was extremely solid and I also enjoyed the world building you did in this chapter :P