july4ruby

Thanks Emily. It is actually based on mothers day.I wrote it for my mom but i just put it here to see what others thought about it.Thanks for the wonderful ...

hi Really great.Especially the hp fans loved it.I really really enjoyed it.awesome.I think I want to read more like this.>_< Great job .........july...........

hi! I simply loved the poem! The main idea was could use a nice rhyming scheme the other small mistakes were pointed out by the others so I just want ...

I like the pattern of the poem.I guess I can see a vague pattern.why not try to make the subject more precise.Still I liked it.Keep up the good work.:p

Hi grin! Thanx for the review . Your language is nice. I like the old English style, it really suits the story, but the rhyming isn't necessary. Usually you'll have ...

Thanx for the review dreamer.yes,it was supposed to be thou.I just brought wordsworth's poems from the library and I thought what if these disney princesses were in wordsworth's time.Then these ...

Thanks for the reviews.I really appreciate any comments because I need them!I know the last line of the second stanza is a little out of place.The problem is I couldn't ...

I liked the poem very much.The wording is really nice.I guess I don't know much about the details of writing poems because I am a very inexperienced writer but overall ...

And about the punctuation I am not very good at it but I will try to work it out.

thanx for the support ill try to improve my works .i just started and am kinda getting a hang of it.

I really loved the song.even though I don't know much about songs n rhythms I can see this bit that its a great song.keep up the good work.