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even if it did take you forever Im glad you reviewed it livinginfantasy and yes I should have read it aloud, but when I posted it I had read it ...

Sorry I sometimes 'textspeak' out of habit. I'll try not to although I did have a few typos :D but I can't help that. I do get that you don't ...

to bickazer ...oh, Riley's a boy? O_o You should have mentioned his gender earlier because I spent all this time thinking he was a girl. But on a side note ...

chapter one to be posted today or tomorrow revisions to prologue based on slammoths and firestalkers posts, sorry livinginfantasy yours takes more time to go through so ill be going ...

thanks for the advice The books isnt all just about the christmas but it is a big part of the story. although it is good its a little slow but ...

ok thank you to everyone who edited my story. Sry I have two copies saved on my computer since my aunt reads over my work. the slashes are from when ...

as of July 13, 2008 this story has been reposted due to revisions Sorry it took so long but I played around with it a bit taking in all of ...

thank you again Slammoth for editing my story. Yes, I do have a problem with 'then' and 'than' Its a habit I am trying to break. Your help will make ...

I changed a few other things as well just so it made more sensse... Ill post the First Chapter soon, but I have to trype it up since I only ...

thanks...I made the changes and 'then' & 'than' are always something I mix up. I had completely missed 'wrapped' Thanks again!!! :D

that is true it is just a dream Maybe its just the way I read it...its probably fine. Still I cant wait for MORE!

thanks, and yes i have written the 1, 2, and 3 chapters but im constantly changing them around and the prlogue seems to be the only thing that doesnt change