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jpenny

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Rebel Lady

    I love how your poem is written. It's more like a really short story rather than a poem. but I really like the line, "if i had to describe that ...

    Jan 15, 2006
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Run

    I agree that the last line didn't quite go with the rest of the poem. I also think that the pace wasn't too fast it was perfect for what you ...

    Jan 15, 2006


Remember: the plot is nothing more than footprints left in the snow after your characters have run by on their way to incredible destinations.
— Ray Bradbury