joydjones

Hello! The plot and the characters are very intriguing. But details are lacking a bit and the sheer number of I'd is sort of bothersome. Now I may just be ...

That is quite an emotional piece. I felt everything the speaker was feeling. Two minor suggestions though: use punctuation so the flow of the poem is more fluid and; you ...

The imagery in this poem is amazing, I like the fact that you were able to create a poem based off a dream as well. Although, I do think you ...