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Loved the construction of the poem (beginning and ending with the ocean). I also enjoyed your use of French. Overall, I found this poem to be heartwarming and beautiful, and ...

I don't know that I've ever had the pleasure of reading a poem that flowed with such clarity and precision before. T'was very concise, and I really appreciated that. Your ...

You are a fantastic writer! But on the same token, I do agree with MeanMrMustard. I'd love to see more substance added to the poem. That in conjunction with your ...

Beautiful writing! I love how you delved so deeply into the character, and the diary was magnificent. I'm a huge Potter fan, and this was definitley a pleasing piece :D ...

:D Beautiful piece of poetry! I love how it encompassed humanity as a whole. "I found a heart and proceeded to lose it. I kissed a mouth but forgot whose ...

Great poem! :D I think it really captures the beauty of being alone and the appreciation of nature. However, I did find some of the sentences to be a bit ...