joshuapaul

As per my wall Oh how touching. I critiqued it like a short story, as though something needed to be said. I didn't treat it like a memoir, and in ...

Well it takes time to critique something. To read back through it with a fine-toothed comb. To find what stuck out, what needs changing. It takes me two seconds to ...

Yes I should have buried this one out the back with the dog. It never really got off its feet, I never came back to it and it never really ...

I will extract what I can from your comment. However, I must remind you that this isn't a standalone piece. If you read something that ends in 'chapter 5' or ...

Sorry lies, that was harsh. I didn't want to ruin it for the people who haven't seen. But,the reason you are wrong is Steve Carrells character, Cal, doesn't fall in ...

Have you seen it? Because you were wrong. That's all I will say. I had the same mindset as you, but give it a chance. It's much better than you ...

I'm going to quote E. M. Forester on this. The king died, and the queen died. -> Not a story. This is a narrative, a sequence of events. A story ...

This is pretty good I think :) one thing should 'tied' be 'tired' ?

Nice work ;)

Amazing. Simply amazing, well done. This is so original and strangely mesmerizing, I almost forgot I was on YWS and started thinking I was on Twitter. Brilliant!

I will be back to review this, looks good though and thoroughly enjoyed pt. 1.

Mike I will get your review to you via Email - It's far too long and comprehensive to fit here and I have edited in the format you sent it ...

Great story

Thanks for your advice. I have believe it or not done a tonne of research into infection in humans. The idea for the story spawned from a dog attack in ...

I started reading this and it seemed decent. I may come back and do a decent review but for now I will just say 7000 words is probably too long ...