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Ya me could do that rememeberdecember I dont mind

No to be mean I had to read over this a few times before I got what you is kinda confusing to me but other then that I liked it...but ...

I plan on making it longer but first I have to think of what I want to add...but thanks

Im not upset about what you guys are saying but I put it that way so it look like a little kid wrote it and i like it that way

I like how this is put out and also like how it relates to some people...well at least I know I feel like this sometimes. I think if you add ...

ok thanks but i like it this way im gonna add more to it but that's it

Thanks I will work on it all soon. I'm glad you liked it.

I really like it but I think you should add a little more detail and make it a little longer.

I enjoyed reading this but now im kinda scared not to be scared,but i like the way its put and set.

I really enjoyed reading your poem and Have nothing to say then your a really good writer.

Thanks JasperSkye...I just got out of a relationship when I wrote it, and ok lexieells

Thanks everybody but I honestly like it the way it is and was gonna add more to it later on and try to fix it. Lol and ok haley10019 i ...

thanks i will change it now.

Sorry You didn't like it but honestly I do. Thanks for being a huge fan of my work but doesn't everyone make mistakes. Dont worry about being mean and I ...

I like it but in this part =I collapsed to the floor and groaned. I had gained five pounds over the holidays.=I think it might sound better if you take ...