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their is it's just not this, and anyway don;t take it so personally I was just pointing out the facts. Plus it's not just because their shape shifters. I'll list ...

Unlike all these other people I only have one thing to say about this. G-E-N-I-O-U-S

It was a nice idea but I just get the feeling that it is very rushed apart from that its alright.

thanks for the review :D :) :( :o :shock: :? 8) :lol: :wink: :roll: :twisted: :evil: :cry: :oops: :P :x :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant: :thud: :smt008 :smt007 ...

Ha that's the same though I had when I was ten except I just said it was to live the way you want to live I know I was such ...

Yeah everyone that's grilling me is totally right I was an well you know I edited my review even though it now more of an I'm sorry for being jerk ...

Yeah thanks for the review I was in bit of a rush when I route the last bit, and R.E [Religious education] it's just what it's called in my school ...

I think it would probably go better in poetry somewhere because it doesn't really have a plot. [dramatic poetry maybe?]

Good description with cool names theirs gonna be more low right

I thought the mother was a bit to harch and too phisical, it was still a good read

pretty good but maybe a slower pace

Great start hope theres going to be more