jok101

I like the basic idea for this story and will probably start thinking about my own story with similar circumstances minus the abusive farther and mafia bit, and la bit ...

Since I only review story this review will probably quite short. I like the character you've created, when you find out what he has done you know that he is ...

me again I just wrote the last review so can't be asked to do another one. The problem is still the same, chapter length. I don't see a problem with ...

I don't know anything about grammar so I won't try and correct any mistakes you might of made. I thought it was a good start to your story. It was ...

So I've read all your post about this story and think it's pretty good, apart from it being a complete rip off of the werewolf things from twilight minus the ...

I liked your story the characters seemed a lot more like real people than most stories on this site. Yes they were stereotypes but if a stereotype is done well ...

Finally, I've read all you chapters and am relieved I've found something actually worth reviewing. Right so I can't do grammar but I don't think its useful anyway. I for ...

Okay well I'm gonna ignore the christian bit because that's just your personal preference and a backdrop that could be done with any religion. I like the idea of an ...

I through this story was alright. I didn't read the whole thing though because I felt it missed a certain, draw me in moment that all good books need. It's ...

Wow! is the H for harsh, H seriously you could of said one nice thing. Bacon I liked it it was straight into the story no long journey to victims ...

Okay so your third review. I thought it was alright it was a bit too short and rushed to get a feel for the story. With that kind of history ...

Dam why couldn't you of written more. If their were any grammar mistakes I didn't notice them. The word went together and made sense. I thought it had a strong ...

Well just so you don't it expect it I'm rubbish and grammar and I don't pick out lines that don't make sense. Anyway so I liked it, it was the ...

OMG that was so funny I was laughing right to the end, oh wait no I wasn't. As some people have said it's not really a comedy or a parody. ...

I'm a great lover of vampire books so I had to review tis even thoguh I didn't want to but it needs to be done. Okay so This seem like ...