jls1638

While this is pretty depressing, I like how you captured the point of view of the people who cut and it gives an understanding in what their frame of mind ...

I love this it is amazing in detail and analogy of a true friendship. I wish others would understand the definition of friendship and what that means. I can definitely ...

thanks for sharing your work and keep up your writing, it's beautiful.

First of all it is really short for poetry usually for poetry you want at least four paragraphs like this to give the reader a hint of what you are ...

I definitely think that it is a good start. I love the detail and the hinting that she has implanted memories. Given this it's a little confusing but it seems ...

The first thing is that you might want to consider elaborating in the following, it kind of jumps in there and is really confusing. It wasn't fair! I didn't want ...

I love the detail. It is very vivid in the explanations. It left me wanting to know first who was following her. Her being in an alley way and someone ...