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Jimss here By the time you read this third review, you may have figured out that my reviews are often highly opinionated and full of snide remarks. Still, I have ...

Jimss here Hey SilloriaD, It's me again. If you don't mind, I'll do a review as a read through your story (in the proper order this time). And let me ...

Jimss here First off, good stuff. My honest advice? Switch the paragraphs around and change a few words to make the emotional punch still come in at the end. When ...

Jimss here Hi there Lupa22. From what I can tell, you are a seasoned vet on this site, and I am but a YWS newb, so forgive me for anything ...

Hello there SilloriaD! Tis I, Jimss, the worst reviewer this website has ever seen! Seriously, I am p*** poor at these things. I'm going to try to do a review ...

Hey, Aleta, I'm a new reviewer, so please bear with me. I always like to start with the positive elements of a review first, so here we go. Also, I ...

Hey! New reviewer here, so bear with me; Pros: 1) You have a really solid start here. I think you have a good concept here, from what I've read so ...