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Re: Pills (tenative title)
Incredible story...strange really. I have witnessed such a metamorphosis myself a few times, and it is a travesty when beautiful girls are ruined by hammering drugs. But we must remember ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Miss You
I see great potential for a beautiful song in what you have written :) The staggered structure mirrors the forlorn theme wonderfully. As I read I could not help but ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: mirror image
I think this piece is great. ...lady shaped like me/Withering at the other side of the fountain An isolated moment in time where the speaker witnesses a metamorphosis. until she ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Lonely
A lovely piece of art! Honest and unashamedly personal. The back and forth nature of your work, the pretence and the reality, to me evokes the thoughts of a mind ...
Jul 21, 2009
