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jimishine

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pills (tenative title)

    Incredible story...strange really. I have witnessed such a metamorphosis myself a few times, and it is a travesty when beautiful girls are ruined by hammering drugs. But we must remember ...

    Sep 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Miss You

    I see great potential for a beautiful song in what you have written :) The staggered structure mirrors the forlorn theme wonderfully. As I read I could not help but ...

    Sep 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: mirror image

    I think this piece is great. ...lady shaped like me/Withering at the other side of the fountain An isolated moment in time where the speaker witnesses a metamorphosis. until she ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Lonely

    A lovely piece of art! Honest and unashamedly personal. The back and forth nature of your work, the pretence and the reality, to me evokes the thoughts of a mind ...

    Jul 21, 2009


“All stories are true," Skarpi said. "But this one really happened, if that's what you mean.”
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind