jesskare

I got really into reading this, i was disappointed when it ended haha! I don't see any major problems with it, and i think it flows really well too good ...

This is good, you just need to check over your writing to make sure you haven't repeated anything :) xo

I've only just joined, so still new at this...your's is actually one of the first pieces i've read. I loved it. It feels so real, and i adore your style ...